Tuesday, May 9, 2006

Titanic (1912) Comments

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The big talk does not remove the wield
but manliness is to remain firm in the field
many though claim to be heroes and knights
that speaks out is the sword and the shield
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Mohammad Ilyas
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Donny S 10 May 2006

This is a really good poem...my favourite line is 'but manliness is to remain firm in the field' - Keep up the good work! Dona

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Dr. Lubna S. Khan 09 May 2006

well written. i like the line 'The big talk does not remove the wield ' superb writing

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Intriguing poem...i liked this alot...well done!

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Mohammad Ilyas

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