Titanic Comments

What a wonderful way to tell this story; you have me spellbound. Amazing.

You pieced together a perfect image in your wonderful poem. This is just more proof of your brilliant talent.

Absolutely astonishing poem. I am completely absorbed! Thank you so much!

Dear Madam, I admire your style greatly. I have read some of your poems, But surely this ranks above all. This could easilly be considered someday as the greatest poem ever written. This is verse becoming alive.

Your poem about Titanic... Should enter Poetic Land... Like Rumi’s...and many others…you admire and praise... I always wanted poeting...about Titanic... But we had worst man-made tragedy than that We lost 1.5 million innocent lives... During the same dates (1894-1923) Those who never killed a bird... Including my grandfather and his kin...peers...and more We lost not only lives... Lands, gold, bank accounts, Churches, Fortresses, which belonged to us before Christ We were tortured...cursed... Still continues without any help No race had what we had Still our genocide not recognized…Yet By people who think have a deep ‘Christian Faith’...! Still 2 million Armenians are 'Turkified' (Lost their Faiths, cultures, name…surnames…! ! !) In their Armenian Highland (Anatolia) And are unable to open their mouths...! We are discovering day by day through the Internets…! Sylva-MD-Poetry Written instantly

The Two of us together have a terrific history lesson. LOL Very nice. Carolyn Ford Witt of Titanic's demise

Oh my. Lovely. A beautiful poem for a very sad occasion. Great job, Val.

Excellent work! Looking forward to reading more of your poems!

Yeoman work with unflinching enterprise. Continues the tradition found in Thomas Hardy's famous poem The Convergence of the Twain. drb

very well researched and written. My father was born the year it sank.

This is a fine and intricate commemorative verse and definitely enhanced by the notation. Great work and a genuinely respectful tribute.

What more can I say that other poets haven't already, but what a fantastic poem Val. All your research was well worth it because it is really an epic piece of work.All I can say is please continue sending in your work Val as you are without doubt a talented poet and writer.

another spellbinding work............. hats off to u

An epic poem; You have managed to portray more of a vivid picture through your words than the new 3-D version on the silver screen. Much time and energy must have been spent on this one, nicely done Valerie......

Your artistry with words know no bounds Val another well thought through poem.

Very enjoyable poem. I liked your explanation of the verses, backed up with their history.

i think you've anchored the legend to this poem.

A truly fantastic poem, and a fantastic tribute. Very well written. A truly amazing write.

Oh, Val, that really was The BIg One, what a write, what work, what effort, I can`t even begin to think how long that took you to research and write, A wonderful piece, so sad , I`m sure we will all shed a tear today reading it, Just thank you is all I have left to say.