Monday, September 21, 2015

Tissue Paper Comments

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I was the only shelter,
people killed me with the dagger,
i was treated as a great saviour, they used my as tissue paper,
i holded them when they fell, and they kept me for the sale,
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Kelly Kurt 21 September 2015

With the exception of a few English errors, this was a wonderful poem, Pathik. Thanks

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Pathik Tank 21 September 2015

Sure i will rectify my error thanks for the comment

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