Tired Of Not Being Herself Comments

wonderful thought expressed nicely.

A lesson to the world through a flawless beauty....wonderful thought and write...and of course inspiring too

She became a social animal Traits changed To suit one and all Mingled with the public Too many of them to handle Too many emotions to deal with. a nice and thoughtful stanza.

She cried for help But she became distant Elusive as Siberian Tiger Back to a reclusive Rural life Where she truly belong. experiences of life from the so called high society to the simplicity of the village where she really belongs. lovely poem highlighting the emptiness of the so called high society. thank u dear poetess. tony

In search of the pretender I, the ego, associated with body and mind, she lost her real identity, the Self, that she really is. But then Back to a reclusive Rural life Where she truly belong.

A beauty without a flaw One that shimmers And shines That knocks everyone's socks off.........so touching and true. Beautifully composed. Thanks again.

But she became distant Elusive as Siberian Tiger Back to a reclusive Rural life Where she truly belong... very fine and clear example of the tiger.......... elusive........... be yourself that is the message of all sages of all time............ thanku for this message dear poetess. tony

The true beauty of a woman has been astutely inscribed. The theme of the poem is nice. This poem reveals that we can't change the natural beauty The inscription is touching and amusing. This poem has special attraction. It has brought me here for second reading. Really it is a beautiful poem. Thanks for sharing again.10.

She became a social animal Traits changed To suit one and all Mingled with the public Too many of them to handle Too many emotions to deal with...........so touching and true. A beautiful poem shared astutely. Thanks for sharing.

What a wonderful write, Rose Marie! ! Acceptance of who you are is the greatest gift you can give to yourself! Sometimes it takes a lifetime to learn this!

She wanted to be somebody Got treated And finely bleached Cultured like a piece of gem...... an existential problem.. not being able to be what you are. in the final verses it is crystal clear. elusive siberian Tiger......... recluse, thank u for developing this theme.. identity problem.. tony

We all know where we belong. A very good poem.+++10

Back to a reclusive Rural life Where she truly belong. Innocence and simplicity of a rural woman running in words, flowing in lines and flying in the poem, a great poem.

She cried for help! ! Thanks for sharing.

A lyrical narrative of circumstances not uncommon to common experience, but here revealed with the exhortation of wisdom. Your construction is impeccable, and your delivery strongly enhances the message of the narrative. Well done, good poet.

My favorite lines: “She cried for help/But she became distant/Elusive as Siberian Tiger Back to a reclusive/Rural life”. The simplicity speaks volumes in your poem dear Rose. I appreciated it!

And finely bleached, it is a sad tone for society, thanks for sharing the poem with us