Tired Am I Poem by me poet yeps poet

Tired Am I

Rating: 5.0


Now in this life remains no fun
no pun
no mun
no sun
no son

what have I done
to my life
have never won
ere the rising sun

I have been here loafing long since
couldn't find a thing
they all say he is roaming about
but none can see him
of that there is no doubt
only spiritualists howl
fool you
we will ostracize you
FO

even blind men can see
why don't you
can't you see
I am running for stand of victory
get outta here will ye

can't imagine you will beat me
kick off like a foot ball
stay 6 feet plus 60 more from me
outside my field
understand thee
idiot you for ever be

Tuesday, January 12, 2021
Topic(s) of this poem: affinity and love,spirit,hate,revenge
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
simple follow blinded or blind folded ones
COMMENTS OF THE POEM

What an emotion-filled poem! awaking many many ethics slumbering, even blind men can see why don't you can't you see I am running for stand of victory get outta here will ye

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me poet yeps poet 13 January 2021

lol one costant poet does comment

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Varsha M 13 January 2021

You were superfast when site was revealed first then became the snail often lingering in one place.

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