Saturday, October 25, 2008

Tired Comments

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Tears are blinding my vision
Pain ripping through my heart
Hollow and empty, lost and tired
Happiness no longer lives in me
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T.James Becker
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Sarvesh Kulkarni 08 November 2008

Wonderful poem. The yearning described is fantastic. Beautifully woven. Thank you.

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Reshma Ramesh 04 November 2008

beautiful............will be back for more sure...........

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Viola Grey 25 October 2008

the darkness inside me truely loves this piece....but my heart wishes you light again....another wonderful poem TJ....great work

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T.James Becker

T.James Becker

Prescott Arizona
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