Open your eyes you will know
that her love is who wants to go
don't try to follow or catch
her love because it's like a flash
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well written piece about lovers way...Nice poetic ending you have put up...Thanks!
I love all ur poems! i cant say anything about this one either! lol it was amazing like all ur other work.
it`s cool i like the rhyme in the lines and although the in the last lines u stress to avoid love i think u put hope behinds the lines what`s going is better.......well done
wonderfully written. failure of love to gives pleasure. shan
Everybdy has a soul mate, and we will go through so many failed relationships to find him or her. This poem talks negatively about affairs of the heart, but when a relationship fails, it is actually no one's fault. The love interest just fades and there is nothing more in common. But always keep searching for you soul mate because she isout there waiting for you to find her. A 10+++++ and thank you for sharing. Love & hugs, Barbara
Good tips for young lovers, but I am too old for these tips.
Very nice poem I really liked it I congratulate you(i gave you a ten) .just keep writting
Very nice poem I really liked it I congratulate you(i gave you a ten) .just keep writting
Very nice poem I really liked it I congratulate you(i gave you a ten) .just keep writting
not bad, well written, every person has some original ideas. so do you.
Nice and simple poem for love and lovers. May God accept your prayer! Keep on loving and writing. Best Wishes Naseer
I am in love with my fiance for many decades. I am yet to meet her. I am just waiting for her.Oneday she will meet me. Your poem is really good. Keep on writing and share with us.
Nice tips! I like it... the words are simple yet stylish. Keep it up! A 10...
The tips you give here are all sound and written with style - - a fresh and flowing write - - keep it up and very best wishes - a 10 from Fay...
A lot of feeling in this poem. Your ideas and priorities change with time as you are very young, but off to a good start. Keep writing and sharing. Best Wishes, Marilyn
a potent and hard hitting statement well penned hold your tears and stay away from your fears throw all the keys perhaps your heart will live in peace don't search for another queen the last one was so selfish and mean cheers