Monday, March 2, 2009

Tips For Lovers Comments

Rating: 4.2

Open your eyes you will know
that her love is who wants to go
don't try to follow or catch
her love because it's like a flash
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Saadat Tahir 12 July 2010

a potent and hard hitting statement well penned hold your tears and stay away from your fears throw all the keys perhaps your heart will live in peace don't search for another queen the last one was so selfish and mean cheers

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User Deleted 10 May 2009

aaah! ! this is so nyc nd shwit...great poem!

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Catrina Heart 20 April 2009

well written piece about lovers way...Nice poetic ending you have put up...Thanks!

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Hakurasen Lee 26 March 2009

I love all ur poems! i cant say anything about this one either! lol it was amazing like all ur other work.

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&&angel4ever && 15 March 2009

it`s cool i like the rhyme in the lines and although the in the last lines u stress to avoid love i think u put hope behinds the lines what`s going is better.......well done

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 15 March 2009

wonderfully written. failure of love to gives pleasure. shan

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Barbara Terry 15 March 2009

Everybdy has a soul mate, and we will go through so many failed relationships to find him or her. This poem talks negatively about affairs of the heart, but when a relationship fails, it is actually no one's fault. The love interest just fades and there is nothing more in common. But always keep searching for you soul mate because she isout there waiting for you to find her. A 10+++++ and thank you for sharing. Love & hugs, Barbara

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Rajaram Ramachandran 15 March 2009

Good tips for young lovers, but I am too old for these tips.

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Soumia Benmechiche 14 March 2009

Very nice poem I really liked it I congratulate you(i gave you a ten) .just keep writting

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Soumia Benmechiche 14 March 2009

Very nice poem I really liked it I congratulate you(i gave you a ten) .just keep writting

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Soumia Benmechiche 14 March 2009

Very nice poem I really liked it I congratulate you(i gave you a ten) .just keep writting

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Costa Anakiev 14 March 2009

not bad, well written, every person has some original ideas. so do you.

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 10 March 2009

Nice and simple poem for love and lovers. May God accept your prayer! Keep on loving and writing. Best Wishes Naseer

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Ershad Mazumder 09 March 2009

I am in love with my fiance for many decades. I am yet to meet her. I am just waiting for her.Oneday she will meet me. Your poem is really good. Keep on writing and share with us.

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Mimi Fakhira 09 March 2009

Nice tips! I like it... the words are simple yet stylish. Keep it up! A 10...

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Fay Slimm 09 March 2009

The tips you give here are all sound and written with style - - a fresh and flowing write - - keep it up and very best wishes - a 10 from Fay...

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Jessie Lee 09 March 2009

this is a very good poem i like it great start keep er up

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Marilyn Lott 08 March 2009

A lot of feeling in this poem. Your ideas and priorities change with time as you are very young, but off to a good start. Keep writing and sharing. Best Wishes, Marilyn

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