Tiny Words Comments

these dots..might bring some drops of happiness or sadness what are these dots? maybe, no more than tiny little words.......impressive lines. Beautiful poem nicely executed.10

true words in poetic form.

Meaning and power of tiny dots outspoken. Great write.

Profound poem of reality, what am I.

Wonderful worded words. Nice little dots in this creative poem my friend!

Heartbeats I say! Lovely verse! Dorothy...comment short so it won't roll away...

Amazing! So poetically wonderful, your heart speaking volumes! Dorothy A POET WHO LOVES TO SING

Tiny words make the poem big. The sublime poem captures the heart.Well done.!

little words have power very well written a good read

Yes, we are all miniscules of dots..... invisible and strewn apart! But there is an invisible connect between one and the other and when all these dots come together, it grows bigger and bigger and produces immense collective energy in the form of thoughts! Great write, Elena!

This poem is really awesome, and deserves a full 10/10. The title and the beginning lines are eye catching. 'just a minuscule dot, almost invisible, in these immensities' is indeed a poetic thought. Well done, Elena!

this dot, it seems to me, does think and wonders. (this phrase alone drove me to like it, great poem.)

So tiny yet tangable so small yet significant. A powerful perspective that inspires the mind and satisfies the soul. Well done my friend.

I was very moved by this poignant poem. It's honest and introspective and I like how you use the dots to illustrate and connect your thoughts. Very nice poem.

a bunch of great ideas.....like a wild flower bouquet...fragrent and leasing to the inner eye.... we all have these feelings....at times just as tender and we awestruck... mostly lost in a maze of oddities and insecurities....never to see the daylight.. you put em on paper very nice.... cheers

Little tiny words have power, like little tiny seeds having power within! So enjoyed this read! ; D

Simply amazing and yours it’s a doting [Shower with love; show excessive affection for] for poetry…so many dots floating in you just merge them and watch the magic…we will view it too…thanks for such a nice poem… 10/10 Ms. Nivedita UK

liked these lines in urpoem.. transform.. in one.. they grow and grow what do I see one very very biig big heart.. very good. keep up God bless you. invitation to read me too.

Love it! Great reading 10+

vibrant, colourful n alive with sensations .