Tuesday, May 7, 2013

Tiny Vampire Comments

Rating: 4.7

The world's number one killer
I wonder why it hasn't yet made its way
Into a horror movie thriller
Why, though it could beat
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Smoky Hoss 15 March 2021

Very good, and true.

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Kim Barney 10 February 2021

Tiny but deadly indeed!

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Leeann Azzopardi 21 September 2020

if they are bad where you live, they are worst in Ontario Canada! Bravo!

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Kevin Patrick 21 May 2013

Ouch I'll remember this the next time a female culcidae is digging into my dermis with her probiscs, there was a lot of humor hear in such a dark subject. It is funny how tiny things can have huge repercussions to our own bodies, I must congradulate you on this great work and for using the word plasmodiums' withing a sentece that is not distracting.

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 20 May 2013

lovely 'mosquito' the tiny vampire that is a good message for the WHO malaria eradication compaign very nice one

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 20 May 2013

lovely 'mosquito' the tiny vampire that is a good message for the WHO malaria eradication compaign very nice one

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 20 May 2013

lovely 'mosquito' the tiny vampire that is a good message for the WHO malaria eradication compaign very nice one

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 20 May 2013

lovely 'mosquito' the tiny vampire that is a good message for the WHO malaria eradication compaign very nice one

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 20 May 2013

lovely 'mosquito' the tiny vampire that is a good message for the WHO malaria eradication compaign very nice one

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Excellent poem, very whimsical, nicely done.

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Tribhawan Kaul 12 May 2013

A nice poem about blood sucking vampires: - mosquitoes. Enjoyed reading.

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Abdu Musa 10 May 2013

I really enjoyed it, well done!

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Aadil Masood 10 May 2013

I went on the journey of imagination for some time with this poem. I flew in the airplane of imagination and on the wings of tiny vampires. Nice poem.

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Dave Walker 09 May 2013

A fantastic poem, to think what a tiny bite can do.

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Neela Nath Das 09 May 2013

Very nice poem. Loved it.

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R.j. Wynn 08 May 2013

The plain, the plain, Here it comes Boss.

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