Friday, March 30, 2007

Tiny Shards Comments

Rating: 4.5

I scream inwardly... a silent scream
But, can you hear it.? ? ?
This scream, to anyone who knows
What it feels like when your soul
...
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Michelle Tiddy
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Francesca Johnson 31 March 2007

The ending is much better now, Michelle. Fantastic poem........ Love, Fran xx

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Marci Made 30 March 2007

am with you all the way on this one em, total agreement......hugs, (avongal)

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Francesca Johnson 30 March 2007

Surrealistic and mind-blowing, some very Daliesque visualisations here, Michelle. The last stanza didn't quite fit, in my opinion, but the rest is superb... Love, Fran xx

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Michelle Tiddy

Michelle Tiddy

Staffordshire, England
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