Monday, July 21, 2014
Tiny Earth Comments
Rating: ★2.3
I sat upon an elephant in the middle of my room
I reached up through the ceiling and held onto the moon
Past the rings of Saturn I reached out for a star
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Mohammad Skati
01 September 2014
You're a great poetess. I felt you in every line. I enjoyed the exact meaning of the word tiny . Good luck.
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7/23/2025 1:29:46 AM # 1.0.0
Darlene .. You need some polish but are incredibly inventive. I feel you will eventually develop a better rhythm. Looking forward to reading more of your work (this is my second encounter with your work... it bodes well) A 9 because you will be perfecting your technique and we need some means of informing you with a 10.