Tuesday, October 20, 2015
Tiny Daggers Comments
Rating: ★3.5
I fear the dagger you pierce within my heart.
Let my blood come forth by a blade of steel.
Keep your words, please let them not impart,
for the pain they reap, I will surely feel.
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8/24/2025 7:09:08 AM # 1.0.0
I don't really know how to judge a poem other than a limerick, Melvina. This does not appear to me to have a very good rhythm. I think I need instruction. Or perhaps there is no rhythm as you would expect in a limerick? I shall try harder. As it stands I give it a 7