I ended up
In another's room
Curled up in a big, blue bed
The walls painted
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When I first saw the length of this piece, I must admit I thought I would skim read, but you had me from the start - just like the experience you communicate, the poem is both involving and moving. I think you have communicated a feeling of nostalgia and childish loneliness we all feel in a very singular and striking way. Thank you.
I meant to say the struggle of finding your own true identity as being an unfortunate situation we all can relate to. Once again this was reallly good. Deffinitely adding to my favs.
WOW, that was really really good. I might be wrong but it seemed to me that you were writing about finding your own true identity which is something we can all relate to unfortunately. This was really good though.
that was THE best poem i've ever read-it describes me so much.