Tiny Bird Comments

throttled by napalm invading wind.the wonder of you is on me again as if your mind and mine work in unison. wonderful poem......10

Lovely poem and a way with words on expressing the bird in flight. Really good!

A beautiful poem. Nicely composed...10

the wonder of you is on me again as if your mind and mine work in unison...thank you for sharing

When we wonder and adore tiny bird, we awaken the true poet inside. I love this one.

...somewhere between the excitement of hopes and crashing futures.. Big truths nicely put into words!

Tiny bird, titanic sky, what a gift to your wings, hard to rest catching line

Titanic sky! ! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

" your littleness so much so you are integral part of space, pushing into empty air you flap up" Brilliantly penned down! Thanks for sharing this simple and elegant piece of poetry :)

Wonderful philosophic piece, it begins well, builds well, ends well. Tiny the bird, giant the message.

A splendid work, their is a delicacy and tenderness behind your words, the small bird symbolizes the ultimate freedom, but it faces a large and intimidating sky, the bird appears fragile but has a will as strong as steel, some beautiful imagery, and then the poem changes slightly with man and his napalm sky, but the bird flies on. The closing line enraptures the best of the spiritual man. TOP MARKS!

A very eloquent and well-expressed piece.

Tiny bird, titanic sky, what a gift to your wings, hard to rest in absolute contentment! enthusiasm itself, eyes on freedom rivetted, without feeling'....a powerful opening of a philosophic poem.

your littleness so much so you are integral part of space, pushing into empty air you flap up......so touching and true. Beautiful poem really that attracts me for visit again.

Poetry, a haven for infinite beauty and freedom! We are given the power of the mind and the perception of the heart to wing into the wonders of Life! A profound poem that leads itself to many a reading.. Regards.

Thank you for inviting me to read this one. Wonderful theme. The " littleness" of the bird does not impose any limit to its flight. The last stanza is striking, a very positive poem.

Well done my PH friend.

Yes, minds of a feather, flock together in the collective unconscious. Well written and insightful poem my PH friend.

Such as nice composition with an interesting imagery. Thanks for sharing!

Minds working in unison - so