Lookin through a tinted window
everything is dark and unclear
cant see the brightness in life
only can see the shadows that cast over it
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Brilliant poem, to get the best view of life you must see it unobstructed, go out, rather then watch from with-in. a beautiful piece. keep writing.
Interesting use of a tinted window. Brilliant work and a good write.
Your window on the world is tinted. A fascinating use of metaphor. Very orginal. Ten for you. Kindest regards, Sandra
good but I think it could be a lil better just in the fact of how short it is and the underlying of more needed information and story....still well writen though +
Wow. I can see a lot of potential in you. Keep at it, very very good. Interesting concept.
lasting months, hope mine doesnt last yrs. what a waste-we must broke through! sherri
Garfield wonderfully creative and well penned..reminded of one I wrote years ago...check it out..on my site 'Stained Glass Window' thanks Barry