Monday, January 26, 2009

Tinted Window Comments

Rating: 4.3

Lookin through a tinted window
everything is dark and unclear
cant see the brightness in life
only can see the shadows that cast over it
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Garfield Grimmett
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Barry A. Lanier 08 February 2009

Garfield wonderfully creative and well penned..reminded of one I wrote years ago...check it out..on my site 'Stained Glass Window' thanks Barry

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Vernon Eaker 29 January 2009

Brilliant poem, to get the best view of life you must see it unobstructed, go out, rather then watch from with-in. a beautiful piece. keep writing.

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Absent Wryta 29 January 2009

Interesting use of a tinted window. Brilliant work and a good write.

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Sandra Fowler 29 January 2009

Your window on the world is tinted. A fascinating use of metaphor. Very orginal. Ten for you. Kindest regards, Sandra

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Matt Burgett 29 January 2009

good but I think it could be a lil better just in the fact of how short it is and the underlying of more needed information and story....still well writen though +

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Rita Shay 28 January 2009

Wow. I can see a lot of potential in you. Keep at it, very very good. Interesting concept.

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morgan pifer 28 January 2009

absolutly realatable! ! ! ! but its awsome

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Sherri Coulter 26 January 2009

lasting months, hope mine doesnt last yrs. what a waste-we must broke through! sherri

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