Friday, March 16, 2007

Tinkling Comments

Rating: 5.0

It was faint, that tiny tinkling melody
I knew you were there, but I couldn't quite hear
Slowly it grew stronger, the intensity magnified
You drew closer, my heartbeat increased
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Michelle Tiddy
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Duncan Wyllie 18 March 2007

Very endearing piece, thankyou for shaing it, lots of expressive imagery Love duncan X

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Marci commended your work to me. I love it when my judgments of people are confirmed... in this case, that she is a lady of good taste! ! ! :) t x

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Marci Made 16 March 2007

Michelle, this is simply beautiful. I can hear you calling out to him, if only he'd clear the wax out of his ears. YOu just keep getting better Em......marci(((H)))

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Michelle Tiddy

Michelle Tiddy

Staffordshire, England
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