Tiniest Dust Comments

Fabulous poem with a good philosophy.

But I can fly In the vastness of the universe In the timelessness of the sky Flapping my virtuous wings of the virtual I write my name in visual Appear they in white and blackmadam so sweet poem thanks for shearing 10++++-

bharati, hi i like the image this summons for me- a shaft of light coming through a tree, a door, a window full of dust motes. all of them poems. glen

Thank you very much.Your comments as well as all friends' comments are the 'positives' that give strength to the tiniest dust to keep flying.

Your humble poem renders magnanimous credits to other living and non-living elements.......that is the best method to gain wisdom...you may be the tiniest dust but your wisdom beggars description....

my mate abhors dust! but does she ever dust the house? no way! i think it is cool when i see dust floating through the air if sunlight hits it just right indoors. dusting is a waste of time; one can never get it all. let me look at another poem. bri :)

Beautiful marriage of philosophy and poetry- - thoughts like birds making their way through infinity- your use of imagery defines your ability as a poet to reach your audience with just the right words and scenes.

fly through vastness of dreams

I loved the last 3 lines the most, Oh! I take pride for Being the tiniest Of these tiny dusts. Thanks for sharing this poem.

Having poetic expression to fly without wings is too amazing definitely. You have gone very deep of this expression and this describes the vastness of universe absolutely. Very neatly penned poem shared definitely. Interesting sharing.10

poetry of ocean forms by quantum leap, each dust of light, water and air unites to form blue confluence abounds by ages and eons to beacon. most meaningful write by imagery and metaphors

Personification of Dust. Flying in the vastness of the universe in timelessness. wonderful expressions in this poem dear Poetess.

Beautiful and deep. I love the way you express yourself with words

Non Winged bird Flying high to enjoy the tiniest things of the World that give is real joy and pleasure! Wonderful read dear Mam!

Really liked the poem, so well written..

Life is not beyond the classic theme of five phenomena (i.e five elements) being rooted in the depth of philosophy relating to life and world, tiniest dust like a feeling of Universal Feeling has been personified and embodied in this poem by the poet.; however the first four lines in this poem got ignited in its infinite perspective, and five lines in middle get broken its cadence of thought, but last eight lines have taken again the poetic theme to a classic corner to spread its universal flavor........it would be better if the poet could sustain her inner tremor of thought to the last....thanks a lot

Yes, friends are every important, and they can boost our energies at times; even like boundless ocean of poetry! Well done, thanks for sharing, Bharati!

Truly, nothing is a big thing but accumulation of tiny things.

Yes, though we are all tiny specks of dust, we collectively make the universe of poetry! We can be proud like a drop of water that too has a share in making the mighty ocean, though little be our share! Beautiful poem that shows the promise of you growing from a tiny dust to a bigger clump!

A poem of endless energy and keen observation thank you