Wednesday, September 2, 2020

Tin Comments

Rating: 5.0

Church was a tin chapel,
cold on gray mornings,
a sweatbox in summer,
all uncomfortable,
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Jenny Kalahar
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Sylvia Frances Chan 12 September 2022

Church is for you not a place to dwell for forgiveness and search for God, but a tin chapel and so very hot, metaphors or not but at home you can pray to God too, is relaxed and cool, a sad and honest poem 5 Stars!

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Lyn Paul 02 September 2020

Your words express much sorrow that you have penned so well. May you be well.

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Jenny Kalahar

Jenny Kalahar

Washington, USA
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