Saturday, July 11, 2009

! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Tin Soldier Comments

Rating: 5.0

No its not your turn
toy solider; not today for some centuries
stay firm upright
with bayonet bright
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Rehan Hyder
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Much paint flecked about in so few words...Good capture...Solid penning... FjR

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a well done poem...

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