Thursday, May 1, 2014

Timewaster Comments

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Softly ticking, an insistent thrill,
The wall, my phone, my head is still
A million questions asked
Why me?
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Far Lapenna
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Vijay Sai R 03 June 2014

this poem on time is really well written..nice words to express

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Anil Kumar Panda 13 May 2014

very nice.last two lines are beautiful.keep inking Far.

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Colleen Courtney 02 May 2014

Hmmm..-.an interesting poem. Enjoyed reading!

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Rohan Nath 01 May 2014

haha! entertaining..well done! the reader would be entertained! :)

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