Times When I Smile Comments

Lovely poem! ! ! I like poems that rhyme even if it is just the 2nd & 4th lines. But on this, the last stanza has no rhyming words on both 2nd & 4th lines. Perhaps, the 2nd line can be: " Of all my many trials in a mile, " then insert a word or two on the last line before the word " times" .

Awesome, Sandra Theodora

If I dont comment soon my computer will disconnect...... this is more than inspiring its got life in it its just more than I can comment on its wonderful pardon my spelling thanks for what you've put in words Cliff em em em em

Your poem sounds very inspiring to me. I really enjoyed reading it. With Respect, Jodilee

Lovely. I really liked this poem. Keep up the good work Sandra.

What a great little poem sandra very positive, so in control master of all i'm told made me feel good With a warmth allan

Yep. once again you echo my very thoughts. Sandra your work is great.