Tuesday, June 18, 2019

Times Two Cause My Heart To Heave Comments

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She assured me she'd come, nay, promised me,
My mind was adrift still on banks, oh waiting—
Ship-wrecked as if in thoughts of life mid-sea,
A state, words can't give even a faint inkling.
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Aniruddha Pathak
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Edward Kofi Louis 18 June 2019

'She still fails to come! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Aniruddha Pathak 18 June 2019

Well, the poet does not know. The point is: poor lover gets unduly apprehensive, such is his anxiety. And anxiety bears negative thinking. Thanks for visiting my poem.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 18 June 2019

Troubles and strife returning from nowhere, And waiting, one gets caught in vain wisdom.......nice poetic expression with lofty theme. A brilliant poem is amazingly shared. Thanks for sharing.

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Aniruddha Pathak 18 June 2019

Thanks Kumarmani Mahakul for the feedback.

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