Thursday, August 2, 2012

Timepiece Comments

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Once, the hands of the clock
seemed to gently caress my face.
Reinforcing the reassurance.
My tears, not yet mature enough
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Lynn Stillman
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Captain Cur 07 August 2012

This poem is crafted like a precision timepiece with each sweeping line and word comprising the minutes and seconds leading to the stroking of the hour. I really love this poem. This poem tells me you are still a treasured timepiece.

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Lynn Stillman

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Jacksonville, FL
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