Timely Tanka Comments

Soundly philosophical with wonderful lyricisms, Time is the reminder of what we have and what we must do, it is so so fleeting and it never seems that we have the time to do the things we want to be the people we want. Somehow you do not make the subject matter depressing, you make it wonderful. Beautiful job

Yes everything is bound by Time... the invisible presence that dictates birth, death and the movement of sun, moon stars and even the universe! ! A great poem!

an extra good poem on time. time does rule our lives. we revolve around time.

Very inspiring and thoughtful.

A wonderful poem on time.Time is my favorite theme.Thanks for your precious comment.

we're bound by time/ a great poem! ! ! !