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Dressed in multicolor clown's outfit,
wild hair and an iridescent smile, death arrives,
like an unwelcome guest at his door,
clumsy, drunk prankster who brings no joy,
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Aloha Luz Hanaii... You, have been busy! And beautifully so too... Death in the feminine... quite the outlook... reasonable though, for the females have had a hold on mourning since the first death... not much is remembered about the details of that affair... however; you have a hold of some creative and telling descriptive prose herein... Cheers... All of the best from this life, to you, and all of your relations... Michaelw1two
Michael, thank you for reading, commenting and good wishes, which I too wish you.
A great write.... Thnx for sharing...10 +++... I would like you read my poem In the mid of the night depression you are killing me too... Naila
Love and art! ! Love and pain! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
Wow... What a wonderfully woven story. Beautiful and sad, with lessons of love and grief. I pity the man who 'has it all'. Great write!
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7/28/2025 3:16:53 AM # 1.0.0
A sad and lonely death for one. Then death of a child so hard to bare being released from pain. Heartfelt words.
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