Monday, July 30, 2007

Timely Connection Comments

Rating: 5.0

The atrium to the train station
Thralls with business men, families
Workers and holidaymakers
Excited shouts and dogged strides
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David Taylor
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Marci Made 31 July 2007

Excellent write about the thoughts and happenings of 'the commuter.' Guess it is the same there as here only no Grand Central at the end....So many people we pass by, often I wonder if I give a smile, how often I may touch or brighten a sad day...At times I look for the same in the eyes of a stranger as well. Mostly at airports though, still the same except trying not to be nosey as we all empty out all of our pockets, hand over the shoes and carry on's etc. to clear security...That spot alone, security checks, gives one time to ponder the lives of those next to, in front of or behind us, wondering if their fearful to leave the ground....This is so good, and I need to be quiet now....missed your words for a long time it seems..~~love, marci.xoxo

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JoAnn McGrath 30 July 2007

I do that sometimes in busy places...just step back and people watch...you get that feel of time warp...were you are in freeze frame and everyone else is rushing by...but you see bits and pieces of yourself in everyone that walks by....and it makes you stop and think how connected we really are...even when someone just rushes by oblivious in their own thoughts....alla wonder and you captured it well as always David I wonderful write: O)

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Marvin Brato 30 July 2007

Through this piece of poetry... you brought us to the real world David. It made us ponder what is life made for each of us living. Thanks for sharing. Sensible poem as usual.worth the 10.

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