Timeless Saga Comments
In a time of long ago, he, - dying,
Turned to look at his true love, and needing
No assurance, took her hand. She was crying
As she saw his wound was deep. Wicked greed
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God, Fay, you really get to me with your writing! This is so....words fail me as it feels like I could have thought these thoughts or lived them. God bless those who convinced you to write poetry. Okay, I'll tone it down now.What a heart you have. Hxx
your words give life to the images Fay...love is timeless and it goes on past death...wonderful poem...thank you...Fi 10+++
This write is truly a wonderful piece of work that shows that the love between two people never really die but is timeless. Thank you for sharing your work with us…..10 Scott
Beautifully etched tale of love Fay great read thanks Chris 10+++++
Thou sayeth lover ever lasting, dear sweet lady, you've the heart of a true romantic and poet... sir Andy 10
WOW! Fay this is a truely fantastic poem of everlasting love 10+++++ Tom
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8/16/2025 2:58:55 AM # 1.0.0
Felt a little like 'Brigadoon', Fay, in the tone and wistfulness of the second meeting... but then you'd be too young to remember that film, I'm sure. Regards, Tony