Cross the meadow. On the other side of the hill,
down by, the old watermill. Watching the water swirl,
a little boy, and a little girl. Skipping rocks and fishing,
closing their eyes, and wishing. Climbing trees to
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returned and read this lovely poem again---that is what we do to the well-written, heart-touching, wise poetry the talented poets write---thank you for sharing this lovely gem with us
Delightful piece......wonderful to read....thanks for sharing......
Such a great recollection of the past where the poet is part of the plot as a keen observer! Magnificently presented where the poet puts spotlight on a tender and delightful creature... timeless!
Memories are constantly the best when we look back at our kids time, thinking of the plays we did and all other sweet things. Sure 5 Stars Full. I have given that earlier below and to My Favourites!
WOW, gone back to childhood days. Big dreams in small eyes...to climb and touch the sky, fly like birds, swim like fish and chase butterflies.. relived those days through your wonderful poem.10****
Rebecca, your words flow in and through this marvelous poem. A timeless piece as is the beauty of children chasing butterflies in an idyllic setting such as this, brought to life by your beautiful poem.
I am happy that my two responses have gone through..................to you. This amazing poem goes to my Favourites. Thank you for sharing
I cite here your loveliest lines and words: the finalconclusion of all these beauteous cryings-out: ....as a little birdie cries out with a trill. But for them, time has stood still. Such a fascinating phrase! God Bless you greatest, my dea friend
WOW! Dear Becca, what a most beautiful tender touching heart poem is this! Congratulations to share this emotive feel! 5 Stars, dearest for you!
Lovely one Rebecca. It brought smile on my face. Refreshing childhood glorious memories. Thoroughly enjoyed the journey. Into my favourite.
WOW! ! ! I love this precious poem! ! ! It is so relaxing to read!