Thursday, March 11, 2021

Timeless Butterflies... Comments

Rating: 5.0

Cross the meadow. On the other side of the hill,
down by, the old watermill. Watching the water swirl,
a little boy, and a little girl. Skipping rocks and fishing,
closing their eyes, and wishing. Climbing trees to
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Rebecca Navarre
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Emma Mcullough 06 June 2025

WOW! ! ! I love this precious poem! ! ! It is so relaxing to read!

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Susan Williams 22 January 2023

returned and read this lovely poem again---that is what we do to the well-written, heart-touching, wise poetry the talented poets write---thank you for sharing this lovely gem with us

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Jayne Louise Davies 11 October 2022

Absolutely beautiful poem Rebecca xx

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Anjandev Roy 11 October 2022

Delightful piece......wonderful to read....thanks for sharing......

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Dr Dillip K Swain 04 March 2022

This beautiful poem is timeless

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Dr Dillip K Swain 15 April 2021

Such a great recollection of the past where the poet is part of the plot as a keen observer! Magnificently presented where the poet puts spotlight on a tender and delightful creature... timeless!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 03 April 2021

Memories are constantly the best when we look back at our kids time, thinking of the plays we did and all other sweet things. Sure 5 Stars Full. I have given that earlier below and to My Favourites!

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kyvin nash 13 March 2021

Nice...

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Susan Williams 13 March 2021

I give this 5 stars and a fav

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Susan Williams 13 March 2021

beautiful and sensitive write

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Susan Williams 13 March 2021

memories that stay in our hearts foever

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M Asim Nehal 13 March 2021

WOW, gone back to childhood days. Big dreams in small eyes...to climb and touch the sky, fly like birds, swim like fish and chase butterflies.. relived those days through your wonderful poem.10****

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Richard Wlodarski 12 March 2021

Free spirited fun in both poem and painting!

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Dick Watson 12 March 2021

Pretty and perfect.

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Bill Cantrell 12 March 2021

A wonderful poem from a poetic humble heart, great write!

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Captain Cur 12 March 2021

Rebecca, your words flow in and through this marvelous poem. A timeless piece as is the beauty of children chasing butterflies in an idyllic setting such as this, brought to life by your beautiful poem.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 11 March 2021

I am happy that my two responses have gone through..................to you. This amazing poem goes to my Favourites. Thank you for sharing

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Sylvia Frances Chan 11 March 2021

I cite here your loveliest lines and words: the finalconclusion of all these beauteous cryings-out: ....as a little birdie cries out with a trill. But for them, time has stood still. Such a fascinating phrase! God Bless you greatest, my dea friend

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Sylvia Frances Chan 11 March 2021

WOW! Dear Becca, what a most beautiful tender touching heart poem is this! Congratulations to share this emotive feel! 5 Stars, dearest for you!

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Varsha M 11 March 2021

Lovely one Rebecca. It brought smile on my face. Refreshing childhood glorious memories. Thoroughly enjoyed the journey. Into my favourite.

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