Friday, August 3, 2012

Timeless Comments

Rating: ★3.8

I awake form the first touch of sun rays
settling on my face
I don't feel its warmth
there are walls between us
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Kasia Fedyk
surrender
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Valerie Dohren 12 August 2012

Beautiful poem, very meaningful.

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Alan Halford 05 August 2012

Just love the flow...it has moved me..well done. Alan

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Hezekiah Toheeb Tiamiyu 04 August 2012

Lovely, .... Nice one, great start, wonderful denoument... Good one! ~TT~

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Hamid Negah 03 August 2012

good starting and good ending, thank you i love it.

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Captain Cur 03 August 2012

This poem starts very lighthearted, then slowly delves deeper with a very moving rhythm and tone. I love your work.

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