Thursday, September 10, 2009

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Rating: 4.5

Its hard to feel the feelings dead
Confusion’s more then in my head,
I don’t know what to do im lost
I guess that is, those are my thoughts.
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thomas coltrin
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Amy Douglass (Fifita) 12 September 2009

it was a good poem and i hope u elaborate on it in further poems. it was raw and beautiful, easy to relate to... but one thingi loved about it most was how although it's ur own others can relate to it. loved the ending too...'on the floor the bloods still warm'...

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Carl Harris 10 September 2009

Though not a pleasant poem, this is overall a well expressed one which told a convincing story consistently from beginning to end. You have made progress in your desire to express your emotions, feelings and experiences, and the younger poets on poem hunter will surely be attracted to your poetic ability. Carl.

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