Wednesday, October 17, 2007

Timeless Comments

Rating: 4.3

Sunlight glowing on the little limbs
Encircling my neck, my life
His plump body, this delight,
Warm and forceful, as the sun itself
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Deva De Silva
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Erika Wingo 17 October 2012

Absolutely beautiful poem! What a lovely tribute to your son.

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Mona Martinez 22 April 2009

wow. you have a lovely way with words.

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Michael Shepherd 20 April 2009

I love poems about 'there' - you are there, the reader is there with you, and in some miraculous way, it's the same 'there'.. For me and for that reason, this is one of your best.

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