Sunday, December 8, 2013

Time Zone Comments

Rating: 4.8

He watches the light of the dawn,
Sweeping in with his fertile imagination,
Catching his talk with the fire of elation,
A master of creativity in stories embroidered
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Hazel Durham
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A tender and touching composition that is both refreshing and rich! Well done my friend!

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Akhtar Jawad 16 March 2015

He is now comfortable in his own time zone, Of living is a gift of forgiving, with his family around him, His spirit can never be quenced, as he is now never alone. Instead of living in others' time zone if we learn to live in our time zone definitely we shall be comfortable............10

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Sally Plumb Plumb 24 December 2013

I love an Irish band myself. When abroad we always seek out an Irish pub. Great fun.

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Musfiq Us Shaleheen 10 December 2013

very powerful.. well written. a great poem.. thought provoking and well crafted... how are you my muse poet.. best wishes.. musfiq

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Dave Walker 10 December 2013

A great poem, a spirit is never alone with family around, it just sometimes takes time to realize.

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Kanav Justa 10 December 2013

wow, , , really liked some of the lines you used in your poem, , , , they are so powerful.... a poem rich in thoughts, , wonderful hazel

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Ramesh Rai 10 December 2013

overall a supreme expression. last line is soul stirring much befitting for me. whenever i m alone i feel poets over the world are around as you are now with me n talking with my emotions. your time zone must b reflecting to your past when you'd be thinking how to write poem n me too. but now we both may be thinking to express the supreme height where life evaluates for heavenly pleasures.Hazel my friend you are so good that so each n every words sprouts from your heart as gem of life. thank you so much. l like to share this write. thank you thank you.

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Unwritten Soul 10 December 2013

You always make presenting an excellent work_Soul

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Khairul Ahsan 10 December 2013

'With his wisdom of knowing at last he has found home, Where the empty void is blown away with the westerly wind, ' Well said. Home is where the heart is.

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Sekharan Pookkat 10 December 2013

I love the images used in the poem about his beloved partner

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Noreen Carden 09 December 2013

With his wisdom of knowing at last he has found home. What a beautiful line. I am in awe of your ability to tell a story with your words.I give it a ten.

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Mike Barrett 09 December 2013

With my Irish ancestry, how could I not enjoy this poem. I love its images and truths and the line In full knowledge he is a bright star, . Technically the poem is sound and the last 3 verses (lines) leave one with a feeling of warmth and happiness. At my age (70) , and as an Eckist, I've garnered many insights with respect to our mental, physical, emotional and spiritual beingness and what I've gleaned is reflected in my poetry. I don't know if you've checked out my poems, you might find some quite touching. [To get a glimpse of the Eck teachings, check out the Eckankar.org website.]

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Mike Barrett 09 December 2013

With my Irish ancestry, how could I not enjoy this poem. I love its images and truths and the line In full knowledge he is a bright star, . Technically the poem is sound and the last 3 verses (lines) leave one with a feeling of warmth and happiness. At my age (70) , and as an Eckist, I've garnered many insights with respect to our mental, physical, emotional and spiritual beingness and what I've gleaned is reflected in my poetry. I don't know if you've checked out my poems, you might find some quite touching. [To get a glimpse of the Eck teachings, check out the Eckankar.org website.]

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Valerie Dohren 09 December 2013

Interesting poem Hazel - we need to be comfortable in our own time zone in order to be contented.

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Valsa George 09 December 2013

With the empty void blown away, a man finds a new sky, star studded and bright! With his family around and comfortable in his time zone, he feels he is never alone. A really powerful portrayal of conquest! !

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Paul Brookes 09 December 2013

A very deep and beautiful poem I really enjoyed reading it and you have the gift of painting with words.10/10 BB : O))

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