Saturday, July 18, 2015

Time Wounds Comments

Rating: 5.0

Time cuts like a dull knife
Reopening old wounds
Reminding me how often
I have sat in this very chair
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Suzanne Hayasaki
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Mike Smith 06 March 2016

A free flowing and artful description of a revelation. The wounded narrator depicts the pain of realizing the duplicitous nature of potential suitor of sorts. This realization leads our narrator to decide that it is not by any error in her ways that this pain was served up to her. But rather, the undesirable character of the would be suitor who (quite clearly) takes some perverse pleasure in making himself wanted, then never living up to his feigned interests. A very well written piece giving a glimpse into its authors world.10

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Suzanne Hayasaki 06 March 2016

Thank you for this thoughtful comment.

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Jaishree Nair 18 July 2015

Waiting patiently for a lost love. Thanks for sharing

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Suzanne Hayasaki

Suzanne Hayasaki

Menomonee Falls, WI, USA
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