Monday, March 5, 2012

Time Will Tell Comments

Rating: 4.7

As time passes by,
I am fully aware
Of what I am missing
And I am imaging
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Romeo Della Valle
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William Jackson 17 March 2012

Well penned; I like the sentiment. Betrayal, is personal and deservedly brings condemnation. Emerson said Commit a crime and the earth is made of glass. Commit a crime, and it seems as if a coat of snow fell on the ground, such as reveals in the woods the track of every partridge, and fox, and squirrel.

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Lenore Lee 15 March 2012

Feeling slightly angry are we? Nice! Self-assured, powerful. Loved it!

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Maria C. Pires Costa 10 March 2012

Time really is a witness... I think the poet shows a firm personality dealing with the heart issues. All the best in your life!

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Danielle Elsworth 10 March 2012

I loved this poem very much romeo, this poem hit close to my heart as i read it. I don't think there is a poem of yours that i have never liked Keep writing. God Bless

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 08 March 2012

What an expression! Quite interesting to read this poem

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