Monday, October 19, 2009

Time Will Come. Comments

Rating: 5.0

Although time waits not
............................... for a single soul,
It can pace slowly,
......................... and unroll long hours,
...
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Fay Slimm
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Ernestine Northover 02 November 2009

Romance in the air, sensed by this lady. Patience is the thing one needs to wait for this great happening. Trust too that it will happen. Lovely soft heart beating write and may she win through and find what she is looking for. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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Ken E Hall 02 November 2009

Lovely kind of haunting lilt about this time set poem very enjoyable, only thing when she gets her love========= time fly's when your having fun, thanks for this+++++++10 regards

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Bob Gibson 19 October 2009

Pain is not alone, emptiness is shared! the void we feel, is but distance! not time / thought, but occurrence! no boundaries prevent true love

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time does wait, for they who are ageless, like fay.

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Georgia Girl 19 October 2009

This is beautiful, a reuniting of lovers who will celebrate their union..10

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Daniel Kempson 19 October 2009

Liked the flow to this poem Fay deserves the 10 I give it Daniel

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Fay Slimm

Fay Slimm

in Cornwall U.K.
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