Tuesday, May 23, 2017

Time Will Always Recall... Comments

Rating: 5.0

Watch the sun dance across the
wall. As shadows of the leaves
rise and fall. Summer breeze
blows gently, through the halls.
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Rebecca Navarre
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Anjandev Roy 18 January 2023

Brilliantly depicted....thanks for sharing.....

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Kesav Venkat Easwaran 18 January 2023

Beautifully worded poem. Love in the offing. You say it is spiritual. Agreed

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 18 January 2023

Brilliant Becca especially the last line

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 17 January 2023

' When I held your hand, my heart gave all' beautiful line from a great poem. To my favorites.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 17 January 2023

Beautiful poetic expressions embellished with crystalline images. The flow of words so spontaneous.

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Richard Wlodarski 28 May 2017

A poem that created such vivid imagery that it transported me to that special place and time. Where one feels being truly loved by that special one. And where they are both surrounded by an infinite unconditional love. In total agreement with Susan...Perfect! ! !

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Rebecca Navarre 28 May 2017

Thank You! ! ! Richard, You Are Ever So Kind! ! ! ! ! You Are An Amazing Poet! ! ! ! ! With An Amazing Spirit! ! ! ! ! Thank You Again! ! ! ! ! Many Blessings! ! ! ! ! Many Smiles! ! ! ! !

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Susan Williams 26 May 2017

Perfect. We humans are not supposed to be capable of doing perfect, don'y you know that? Well, apparently you don't know that cuz this is perfect...... absolutely word by word, image by image, emotion by emotion PERFECT. This is POEM OF THE DAY material. Rebecca, I am pouring a heaven of starry 10's on this beautiful love poem. And it for sure is going onto my fav list. Rebecca, congratulations for writing the impossible- -a perfect poem.

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Rebecca Navarre 26 May 2017

Susan, Making Me Blush Again! ! ! ! ! Thank You For Such A Very Kind Reply! ! ! ! ! You Are A Magnificently Powerful Writer! ! ! ! ! That Reaches Hearts In Many Ways! ! ! ! ! All My Heart! ! ! ! ! Thank You Again! ! ! ! ! Dear Friend! ! ! ! ! Many Blessing! ! ! ! ! Smiles And Prayers! ! ! ! !

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Rebecca Navarre 26 May 2017

p/s heh, Susan, , , And Anyone Else, Could You Do Me A Favor And Please Let Me Know If Any Of My Poetry Has Ever Come To Close To Another's Poems! ! ! ! ! I Would Change This Right Away! ! ! ! ! Thank You Ever So Much! ! ! ! ! Blessings! ! ! ! !

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Daniel Brick 24 May 2017

This deserves your description of spiritual because nothing materialistic intrudes as lovers embrace and no doubt share sweet nothings you are too discreet to share. This is a place apart from the usual stress and storm, but the couple are simply ordinary people who are sincerely committed to love over power or profit or fame. This is a vision of paradise before we return to world fortified by this experience of perfection

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Rebecca Navarre 25 May 2017

Thank You! ! ! Daniel, For Such A Very Beautiful Response! ! ! ! ! You Are A Powerfully Wonderful Poet! ! ! ! This Is A Spiritual Poem, Of Love, Friendship, And Mothering! ! ! ! ! Sharing! ! ! ! ! Thank You Again! ! ! ! ! Many Blessings! ! ! ! ! Many Smiles! ! ! ! !

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Rebecca Navarre 25 May 2017

p/s Also Of, Supporting One Another Spiritual And Emotional! ! ! ! ! God Bless! ! ! ! !

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