Friday, October 28, 2016

Time Well Spent Comments

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In the veil between life and death,
the deal was struck as I drew breath.
A fate which I cannot deflect,
the reaper comes now to collect.
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Karen Edwards
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Kim Barney 11 November 2016

I like this. I think it is very well done. I have a poem with a similar theme that you might like. It's called BUTTERFLY OF DEATH.

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Edward Kofi Louis 02 November 2016

With the time well spent! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Dipankar Sadhukhan 28 October 2016

Beautifully expressed....10 You are invited to read my poems and write few words on them..

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