Time Untold Comments

A little puzzling but very engaging, Nell. It had me mapping out different scenarios in a pleasant ambiguity. Written with a strong voice, laced with teasing rhyme, and nicely interspersed with images of the passage of time, it's a thought-provoking read about how others react to someone who's getting old with a history of infidelity.

What and who are you forsaking? No man can manipulate her, no favor will she grant, ..True love is our greatest concern in life. you have wonderfully portrayed it....... thank u dear poetess.. love your poems. tony

Such a marvelous write. Thank you. ++++10 Cheryl♡

A great write.... Keep it up.. I would like you read my poem In the mid of the night depression you are killing me too.. Naila

Very impressive write, Jen S. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

Time to love, time to laugh, time to heal within her respite, He holds his mistress, for one final dance, so sad yet elegantly sublime, ......this poem is really really beautifullllllll. what shall i tell more of it...... thank u dear poet for giving us such a poem. tony

Dear Jen, such a great poem you have written...10+++