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Too much exciting & touchy! Thanks for inviting & sharing such a well knitted poem. Best regards. Sudipta Bhattacharyya.

Beautiful poem...........................

A breath taking incident where all all massacre could have done, but escaped from death's kiss. And everyone saved at last. Thanks for sharing your experience.

Thanks for inviting! Really well knitted poem with realistic experiences, full of suspense, culminating in a happy ending! Thanks for sharing!

THANK YOU FOR THE INVITE, I DID ENJOY READING YOUR POEM

Aloha Vijay... Thank you for the invitation to peruse... descriptive writing is so much fun! Even when the scene being described is not that positive... However; the outcome is more on the 'thank god' everything was fine... Not often does such an event come out so well... Makes one wonder though... perhaps everyone on the ride needs to do something else... before their times are called to an end... I find these thoughts in your words... Evening sun is setting down everyone awaits another day sharing moments, enjoying melodies how very savory is the thought of this Home, work, and that commute here and there a score of everyday people blindly living so very normal as is each day until the snapping of this or that part or cable and in this instant de-je-vu the world for a moment, upside down and in scattered memories and numbing visions I truly experienced the loving hands of 'him'... God Almighty answered and this instant no one was maimed or killed... an experience saving lives 'His' smile is in my mind; IAM still clearly whole and thankfully clear forever echoing my deepest thanks for I have so much more to share... All of the best from this life, to you, and all of your relations... Michaelw1two

Accidents galore in this hasty world! You are galloping up in the rungs of poetry. God bless you to reach the peak soon! almost all the words related to an accident you have used in this' free verse' poem.

Short lines and quite long. I believe in your style. it's being as simple as possible. You are you

Hi Vijay, A little tragic but almost a happy ending. Leaving a lot up to the imagination. Nice flow to your ideas.Thanks for inviting me to read, Greetings Paul

it is exciting poem.coz it's always up to date, things you explained existing every Saturday....thanx you inspired me much.

You are a good narrator, telling your story in a poetic way. Thank you Vijay.

Very well written sir.. I loved the tone of the poem and your use of short sentences, each hitting it's point brilliantly...

Thank God for good doctors!

Thanks for inviting me to read your poem. Twas a good read :)

The poem has written in a pattern of journey too. well knitted poem, remarkably holding the tension till the lives were saved. and expressing hope at the end through believing in God. nice work. thank you for sharing.

Wonderful write.. a stunning depiction of finding trust in our fate!

Thank God Prayers to Almighty Answered at instant An experience Life saving Still in mind Echoing forever… The whole description in continuous tense ends in God. Very very good. We shall all thank God. we all travel wherever we are in the world, in car, bus, train cycles, planes, in ships. May God bless all those who travel. thank you Vijai

The theme is painful but the depiction and presentstion of poem is so high and stunning. Use of diction is most attractable. Experience of life through accident has been penned nicely. The poem has an theistical ending like.....Thank God Prayers to Almighty Answered at instant An experience Life saving Still in mind Echoing forever… Thank you Vijay for posting such an intensive poem. .....10

beautiful experience of life.. go on..

Great work keep it up,