Tuesday, January 22, 2019

Time Trials Comments

Rating: 5.0

Trying to be happy, having reached that harbour
where age proclaims sexlessness, desires squashed, fires banked controlled.

wanting an answer, railing against this forced celibacy
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Andy Brookes
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Dr Dillip K Swain 22 January 2019

but oh, but, but, but.......there is so much sad truth in buts.....this particular line is not only rhythmic but also quite scintillating! Your time trial is a poem based on pragmatic aspects of old age! I admire the write...10

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