Time Traveling Mind Comments

really like this, love how it ends with hope

The mystery of living goes on... nice poem Dave!

The two challenging concepts, the time and the human mind is perceived in a spectacular way. Nice poem.

I enjoy your work, I am able to grasp the meaning of words as they flow from your mind. So many of the writers can't keep things simple and their poems are not always understandable to me, you don't have that problem.

well done...... u will find peace.... read my.... miss you...poem

Wicked last two lines. Put the cherry on the cake for me Dave.

well written, once again... we walk thru the halls of infinity never knowing the breadth!

'tis a phenomenal poem by a magnificient write! ! ! ! top marks! ! ! !

Fantastic! You are a great poet. I love this one! -the closing line is brilliant- Great job!

Wonderful write, flying through the sky in the blink of an eye We travel miles in our thoughts, thinking of our lives, wondering what it would be in future.. how was it in past.. And now we are back in the present wondering whether the peace for which our heart quenches... when and where will we find it? ? I loved this beautiful poem :)