Tuesday, May 13, 2014

Time Travel, It Was Just A Dream (Or Was It) Comments

Rating: 3.8

I dreamed
I went into the future
because something wasn't quiet right
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Dave Alan Walker
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Juan Olivarez 21 May 2014

I am a fan of the original Time Machine by Geoege Pal. Thats what makes this poem all the scarier. Good one Dave.

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Valsa George 20 May 2014

This time travel takes place often in our sleep.... also in the post anesthesia state..... Mysterious is the working of the human brain! You have brought out a beautiful poem on an eerie experience! Enjoyed!

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Dave, that is fantastic. When the patient is under anesthesia in a subconscious state and the medical team is walking around, it is time travel of the real kind. Beautifully developed in the poem. Thank you.

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Smoky Hoss 13 May 2014

Intriguing, very much so; love the mystery!

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