Time To Spread My Wings And Fly Comments

it is interesting because when I read it I see the guilt that you are feeling And I also see your pain All your hurts I see You are full of scars Your parents are not allowing you to be free So they made you into a prisoner And you pay for it I am also seeing in your poem that you are Sad that your parents never thought Something that is valuable in your life And also you are ashame of wearing second hand clothes All the kids have nice clothes And the other kids probably tease you about It is not going to be easy in High school They will tease you too They done to me lot's of times During school lunch break I went for a while to the mall I just wanted peace for myself and get away from those horrible rotten kids

Yes, be as free as the wind but make sure you have the wing that can carry you to your dreams for I know they want you a cream sweet as honey and best of things. thanks and I love you babe melvin