Saturday, November 9, 2013

Time To Sleep.. Comments

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The Sun hid himself
under the blanket of darkness,
the moon found herself
in between the cosy stars
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Mary Amrutha
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Daniel Brick 11 April 2014

This is lovely, it says so much in a few words... about comfort, security, rest. The sun wrapping itself in blankets is a wonderful image, but the image of the moon is more intimate.. This poem speaks to everyone, young and old, because we all follow the diurnal pattern of sleep/awakening/sleep/awakening - you could even read it to a new born baby!

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Calvin Curdle 09 November 2013

Wow. The descriptions are so beautiful. My favourite so far! I am feeling sleepy.

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Mary Amrutha

Mary Amrutha

Ernakulam, kerala, India
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