Like a blow with a fist
That moment I knew
What you did then
And contnue to do
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First line: Like a blow with a fist reminded me of my poem NEVER GIVE UP. Keep writing.
A powerful message to all those that are going through distress in relationships. A well articulated poem, well penned to capture the essence of the piece, and the conviction of the poet. A lovely one indeed. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.
Precise and concise. A sad story beautifully presented. A lovely work.
Wow! Very intense emotion! Extremely honest and from the heart. It is good that you have decided to let go, it will be difficult, but I believe you have the inner strength to do it. You are very brave to move on alone. You are in my thoughts and prayers. Thank you for sharing, truthfully. RoseAnn
Creative and compelling. An important topic that is dealt with in a very responsible way.
It's self-explanatory poem Sometimes moving on is the best thing to do, and have hint the nail right on the head with this poem. Well done Vanessa!
Another lesson learned And at least I now know It is time to move on It is time to let go I don't want to go so please don't let me go. The blow was not mine, at least! Let me cling to the poem for a few more moments.........I don't want to go......and, after all, I don't need to!
Wow. It's very nice poem. It really is. We should detach from our attachments. I wish I could. Very nice poem. There should be the time to styart. A time to let it go. I'd be glad to see your comments on my poems too. Thanks
Dear, it is never to late. Sometimes it is the woman, whom needs to make the first move. These are scary time's we live in today.....iip
Vanessa good evening, this a great write. I like it, that it rings perfectly with my sentiments...
it's time to let go a certain truth I know yet i can't leave the memory of your kiss of your hiss of your touch I long so much how to let my soul my core my deepen whole how to let my heart go far and do apart I see you learned a lesson and I must learn how to take my heart tho' rapt yat freedom earn nice poem it recalls memories tho' sweet yet painful thank you for the read.
dear poet Hate is a word to hate Love is a word to love And life is a word to remember To live with love and passion
Another lesson learned And at least I now know It is time to move on It is time to let go. liked these lines very much. yes let go is a lesson that we learn that we learn on life's Way. you have presented it in a very fine way. thank you very much. tony