Monday, November 9, 2009

Time - Tick Tock Comments

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When peace has faded to a warzone,
And the cold burns your warm skin,
While the young are closer to death,
The eldery remember their youth,
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Chant Gud
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Prince Obed de la Cruz 09 November 2009

you have written and expressed this poem poetically. It is good.

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Ying Escalona 09 November 2009

i prefer time in fantasy..probably, that would be too short :)

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Eyan Desir 09 November 2009

Well written poem... tic tic tic...

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