Friday, May 24, 2013

Time: Thou Art A Scorpion! Comments

Rating: 4.5

Stung many a time to know
Whether I am alive or not.

Taken my childhood and youth
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Wahab Abdul 26 May 2013

a clean poem with robust confi.......it is better without the last couplet...8..

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Valsa George 25 May 2013

The scorpion of time can't sting you! Braving the arrows of life, you will move ahead! ! A very positive approach to life! A highly elevating thought and a beautiful poem! !

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