Time Stop Comments

great piece full of deep meanings.as deep as your wise thought.keep going pal.

Beautiful Persian, love can make time stand still, thanks for this, Lynda xx

Persian my friend...all I can say is Wow.....time stop, loves power...the ultimate power over all. Amazing piece my friend '10' Best wishes Jon.

Perfectly speak the Nightingale, only the love the all-powerful can stop time. You are fine Ashug, Thank you for This. Kindest Regards, Tsira

Her stare makes time stand still, twas love that halted time Hopefully your theory will, come true for you and share a love sublime! ! Great read, short and sweet! *10*! ! Friend Thad

A very beautiful short poem! A sparkle caught into 4 eloquent lines! Very well written! 10 for you!