Saturday, August 20, 2022

Time Slow Down Comments

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Time wait for me,
I can't keep up,
I feel just like a sitting duck,
Waiting for the curtain to fall,
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Jayne Louise Davies
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Jayne Louise Davies 23 August 2022

Thanks to you all for your kind comments x Much appreciated.

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s.zaynab kamoonpury 20 August 2022

I can relate to this fantastic poem as time slips away for me too, life is going away too fast without slowing down. Kudos! ! ! Plz also read and comment my newest poem titled, 'In and out the lusty nil wedding bells '

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Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh 20 August 2022

Time is fleeting not making the life live fully.Beautiful poem!

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Anil Kumar Panda 20 August 2022

Time does not wait for no one. Keep moving and face the challenges. Nice write.

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Jayne Louise Davies

Jayne Louise Davies

Abercynon, Rhondda Cynon Taff
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