Tuesday, May 1, 2012

Time Slip Comments

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I thought I was dreaming
but it turns out
I wasn't even sleeping
I'd walked into a time slip
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Dave Alan Walker
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Adeline Foster 10 August 2012

Is it an escape or just hope. Read mine - Mirror Mirror - Adeline

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Captain Cur 13 May 2012

Aye! I am trying to sail my ship into the 21st century. Don't know why thought. Slippery poem, we all get tripped up by time.

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Patti Masterman 04 May 2012

There are rumors this does happen. Once I thought I saw a nun sitting in the chair in my bedroom. I saw the black and white habit so clearly. Perhaps it was a timeslip and not a ghost? I enjoyed your poem very much.

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Unwritten Soul 04 May 2012

Such a lucky to have a vision of time traveller...hmmm can you try back to dinosaur time? I am joking.Nice one_Unwritten Soul

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Dave, I have gone back and forth twenty or thirty years time period, but you have gone centuries back. Have you recently visited any of the shops that take photographs of people with attires of different Era in Oxford Street, London? Any way Nice poem!

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Eric Cockrell 01 May 2012

we live in many times, in many forms!

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